If I could… (Friday Night Poetry Corner #142)

This will be a rather unusual poetry corner.   I will begin with an opening line to one of my works and I want to see you can add a follow up line to it.  Also in comments, guess from the picture on this post along with my initial line, what the poem could be about.  

Next week I will complete this work.  Happy thinking…
If I could..
if i could see the edge of humanity as it stood apart from me.

-K. G. Bethlehem 

11 thoughts on “If I could… (Friday Night Poetry Corner #142)

  1. Not sure about the word “vibes”: “Hey, feel the vibes, man!” It seems to belong to a different mood and style from the last six words. Depends on context, though, and of course that’s what we haven’t got.

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