This will be a rather unusual poetry corner. I will begin with an opening line to one of my works and I want to see you can add a follow up line to it. Also in comments, guess from the picture on this post along with my initial line, what the poem could be about.
Next week I will complete this work. Happy thinking…
If I could..
if i could see the edge of humanity as it stood apart from me.
-K. G. Bethlehem
KG Bethlehem 
Then I could feel the vibes, as mankind came closer to me.
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i actually like that (wished i thought of it when I first wrote this poem :-). you are very close to the mark!
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Thank you. I’m lookinq forward to reading the completed poem. Blessings and peace.
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Ahh, appreciate it. 😊
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😊
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Not sure about the word “vibes”: “Hey, feel the vibes, man!” It seems to belong to a different mood and style from the last six words. Depends on context, though, and of course that’s what we haven’t got.
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Reblogged this on THOUGHTS OF A POET IN THE RAIN.
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Appreciate it!!
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What an honor! Thanks again
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